Her soft brown fur rustled in the wind. The howl of the wind echoed through the night sky. A cold winter storm is brewing in the forest. Animals are scavenging for the last traces of of fruit and berry's.
Rabbits are hiding, wolves are hunting and the snow is freezing. The big pine trees are covered in thick, heavy snow. Animals are struggling in the deep isolated forest. The bears are hibernating as the forest disappeared into the fierce blizzard. But still in the storm is the lone wolf's faint shadow. 4 Months later... the chirping of birds fills the forest with joy as the animals start creeping out of their houses for spring.
This is my quick write from Tuesday my teacher thought I should publish it because it was really good
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ReplyDeleteHello Charlie,
ReplyDeleteIts me your blogging buddy Santino.I love your Quickwrite because you added so much detail, and it's a really good story. Maybe check if it makes sense. I wonder why you chose to write about this? I'd like to see more from you.
From Santino
Hello Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI agree with your teacher - This piece is rather impressive, very emotive. It reminds me of this great book that I think you would love. It's a contemporary fable about a boy, his love for the ocean and friendship with a big blue groper fish. It's called 'Blue Back' by an Australian author called Tim Winton (my favourite). Maybe I will pop it into school for you one day. Keep it up!